You know, I sometimes... not really compare but think about the Jane Austen novel time and ours.
Both of the men in women in her novels seem much weaker and stronger then us at the same time, just because of their ability to express this pain and not be afraid of doing so.
Sometimes we need our elephants to deal with our lives with our families sometimes we hide behind them and sometimes they stand out needing to be confronted and we are afraid what confrontation will do to those we love or ourselves.
I actually couldn't see it at all on my screen. I had to go back and highlight it to see it.
(Just as a thought, you might want to highlight it in some fashion, or do a text-caption deal for the players who are visually challenged, kind of like the folks who use graphics do.)
I may need to darken it more. It's supposed to be almost invisible, but yeah, a little too light.
Let me fix that.
edit: OK, changed. A little better, I think - you still need to highlight it for most people, but at the same time it's obvious there's SOMETHING there.
It's supposed to have the sense of the unspoken undertone.
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Both of the men in women in her novels seem much weaker and stronger then us at the same time, just because of their ability to express this pain and not be afraid of doing so.
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Thoughtful and well written.
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(Just as a thought, you might want to highlight it in some fashion, or do a text-caption deal for the players who are visually challenged, kind of like the folks who use graphics do.)
Nicely written. :)
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Let me fix that.
edit: OK, changed. A little better, I think - you still need to highlight it for most people, but at the same time it's obvious there's SOMETHING there.
It's supposed to have the sense of the unspoken undertone.
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