"Heroes" Fic

[mercaque]

Title: Interlude

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Eden/Mohinder

Spoilers: Up to and including "Homecoming."

Summary: Eden ponders the future while getting it on with Mohinder.

Comments

[meli_64]

That was really awesome. Eden was cool. Too bad she died. :(

[mercaque]

Oh, thanks! That's a real relief because I haven't tried writing for this fandom yet.

Eden was cool. Too bad she died. :(

I know, right?!!

[shimmeree]

I liked it! I'm very sad that Eden died. I liked her. :(

[mercaque]

Thank you so much! I know, I wish she hadn't kicked off... at least she went out heroically, I guess :(

[decadentdream]

WOHOO!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE WROTE EDEN/MOHINDER FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! (In case u didn't notice u made me a VERY happy girl LOL)

Okay, I gotta say, this was terrific. The phrasing was wonderful, the way you covered the background, the motives and the emotions all in one tiny scene was really skilled. Thanks SO much for writing & posting :D

[mercaque]

WOHOO!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE WROTE EDEN/MOHINDER FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! (In case u didn't notice u made me a VERY happy girl LOL)

LOL, awesome! I know, I really think they were cute together (even with Eden kinda going to the dark side), and I'm surprised they're not more popular. I can't find any fic about them! Do you know of any? Am I a lone voice in the wilderness?

Okay, I gotta say, this was terrific. The phrasing was wonderful, the way you covered the background, the motives and the emotions all in one tiny scene was really skilled. Thanks SO much for writing & posting :D

OMGosh, no way! Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm very relieved that this worked!

[decadentdream]

No! *Cries* That's why I was so happy to see your fic. I did like Eden/Mohinder. But I think I forgot about that when Eden started looking all evil and went after Isaac (and I was being all protective telling her not to hurt him). And then I did a Mohinder music vid over the last fortnight, and after cutting and editing together scenes with them in it I was all "OMGHOWCUTEWHERETHEY?!?!?!?" and I reminded myself how much I liked them working together and suddenly I loved them more and now I'm a Eden/Mohinder shipper and I thought I was alone :( It sucks cause there was that note, and the worried phone call, and there were things that went unfinished and now she's gone! *weeps* But, yeah, yours is the first I've seen and I really would like to read/see more shippiness for the 2 but sadly there isn't :( The place is overrun with Paire fans LOL I'd write some myself if I could get my motor kick-started properly. My muse won't settle into the writing of Heroes fic properly (I've only done 2 thus far and they're all based around the eps).

[tiptoe39]

"Come," she commanded, and Mohinder was helpless as his body obeyed.

Eden, you bad girl. He's actually trying to control himself! Do you know how rare that is in a man?

:applause:

[mercaque]

ROFL. Too rare, unfortunately.

Thanks so much for reading!

[fivil]

Oh, Eden. I love how she's very realistic about the entire situation, no foolish romantic visions clouding her head or anything, and yet it's obvious she's attracted and cares about him. Also liked her own insight of Mohinder and how he's different from his father. Struck as very believable.

I'm not sure if she'd use her powers at all with him but I suppose one word, just that one time, wouldn't be too enormous.

As porn, it worked quite well, too. I like it when porn can have some character introspect like this. Good job!

[mercaque]

Oh, thank you! I'm relieved to hear that Eden seemed to work. I didn't want to get too carried away with "She's in WUV" stuff, but I really like the idea of her having a soft spot for Mohinder.

Thanks so much for reading, and I really appreciate your thoughtful comments!