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hollycomb September 9 2010, 02:20:55 UTC
It’s the Sylfidian rose that finally breaks Chekov out of his stupor.

Oh, of course! I love that he shares that with Jim, and then feels that it wasn't wasted. This was wonderful. <3

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mercaque September 9 2010, 08:27:23 UTC
Thank you :) It was important for Chekov and Kirk to have that ending and I liked exploring them as older men.

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mercaque September 9 2010, 14:27:34 UTC
Thank you so much, I really enjoyed writing this.

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withthepilot September 9 2010, 14:56:45 UTC
That was wonderful. Just so fantastically interesting, above all else. Plus, I nearly teared up at my desk at work!

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mercaque September 9 2010, 15:11:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I found that I really got into exploring Pavel's future self as I kept writing.

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shighola September 9 2010, 17:37:07 UTC
Damn. Wow. That was gripping and emotional and complex and a whole bunch of other things I can't properly articulate right now. It was just really, really good. Thank you.

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mercaque September 9 2010, 18:21:03 UTC
Thank you and thanks for reading. I really appreciate your comment.

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dristi2u September 9 2010, 18:44:07 UTC
you know, i didn't wanted this story to end...ever! i cherished every single sentence and will read it again and again. your story is one of the finest s/c stories i've ever had the fortune to read.

i hope you'll write more stories...

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mercaque September 9 2010, 22:25:24 UTC
Oh gosh, thank you so much. As a writer that kind of comment really means a lot. As for writing more... unemployment/underemployment has been great for my fanfic career, lol.

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