The Dark Side of the Moon, chapter 2

Dec 30, 2011 17:03

As promised, chapter 2. Less kinky, a little more detail and background to the story. This story takes place a year before the events in chapter 1, and it is about their first time.

Title: The Dark Side of the Moon, chapter 2
Pairings: Ian/Anthony 
Ratings/Warnings: NC-17, powerplay, dirty talk, humiliation, bdsm.
Summary: How it began. Takes place a ( Read more... )

slash, smut, nc-17

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rahhicecream December 30 2011, 16:58:26 UTC
I enjoyed this :) I like having a back story to the insanely shocking first story haha I also laughed really hard at the little Kalel part you put in there

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mutual_death January 18 2012, 23:09:08 UTC
I didn't realize you've written more of this story! I'm so far behind on my slash and this has got to be my favorite story going currently...mostly because I'm freaky and love the idea of Anthony being domimated. Not only that but you're writing of their dom-sub relationship is tremendous. [= I love this soooo much! Now I need to catch up with the rest of the story.

Btw, I'm uber interested as to why Ian won't go back to that club...hope you explain it! You have to...you can't leave me hanging. Lol ;)

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mercurial_fan January 19 2012, 07:40:11 UTC
Haha well I've just uploaded chapter four where I explain what happened :) enjoy reading!

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bbm8888 December 30 2011, 18:36:06 UTC
ahh this was soooo good, you write amazing slash ! dont stop !!!

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roxy_rose December 30 2011, 19:03:31 UTC
That was AMAZING once again and sooo hot!! I literally cannot wait until chapter 3!!!! x

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hvnlyumbrlla December 30 2011, 22:59:48 UTC
I didn't post a comment on the last one, I was still working out my feelings about bdsm and D/s. It's unlike anything I've read before and even though I'm not COMPLETELY into it (yet ;P) I think you write it phenomenally. I have so much respect for you and your abilities. And I can't really deny how insanely hot it is! O.o This chapter was a good one, giving us the back story on how their interesting relationship began.
OH! And you know what I find funny? How you made Anthony more submissive. I've always seen him as more of a bottom from the very beginning because I feel like he is more reserved than Ian when it comes to his personality. I was surprised when I first read slash and saw that more people saw him as a top. I like this shift in dominance you got going on. OK! Enough of my ramblings.
I'll read all of these for sure, I can't help myself! Nice work :)

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mercurial_fan December 31 2011, 10:40:00 UTC
Thank you for your nice comment! This sort of stuff is definitely not for everyone, but I am glad that you like it anyway :) The third chapter is going to be pretty hardcore (I think, I haven't written it yet), so consider that a warning, LOL :p

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michaelangelo24 December 31 2011, 09:27:32 UTC
I can never get enough of Ian as a dominating sex fiend. xP

I was actually a bit surprised by how easily Anthony went along with it. He must be really submissive. :P

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