Comments | mercurial_fan: New Fic! Bricks in a Wall.

mercurial_fan

New Fic! Bricks in a Wall.

Jan 30, 2012 11:16

Title: Bricks in a Wall.
Pairings: Ian/Anthony
Ratings/Warnings: R/NC-17. Underage (Anthony is 17, but there are mentions of him having sex when he was younger)
Summary: Anthony has a new teacher. A really hot teacher. Anthony is the hottest boy in school. You do the math.
A/N: I dedicate this story to my boyfriend, who has begun his job as a ( Read more... )

r, slash, underage, smosh

Comments 13

destiel09 January 30 2012, 17:50:38 UTC

OMG! This is awesome! I laughed so hard at Toby's comment when Anthony is asking him if he looks good XD Haha. Anyway, that was aaawt! Write more ^_^ And I'M IN LOVE with Ian as Anthony's teacher!

mercurial_fan January 30 2012, 21:25:52 UTC

I wish I had a teacher like Ian when I was in high school... Wouldn't get much work done though :p

michaelangelo24 January 30 2012, 21:09:59 UTC

You write some of the best smut. :D It was also entertaining to picture Anthony as a horny teenage flaming homosexual and Ian as a sexy teacher. xD One suggestion I can make is to start a new paragraph whenever someone new speaks. I find it flows better that way. :)

mercurial_fan January 30 2012, 21:27:30 UTC

Thanks! :) Yeah formatting is still something I need to work out. I'm kind of experimenting with it, and LJ keeps messing it up. But I'll try to do the paragraph thingie next time :)

michaelangelo24 January 30 2012, 21:29:55 UTC

Formatting isn't that big of an issue, since it is the writing that matters. I usually just copy and paste from Word and it usually keeps the format. :)

9800andseagulls January 31 2012, 01:06:57 UTC

This was hot!Your smut is always really amazing! I love crack-fics, they break things up!
As for The Dark Side Of The Moon, anything y ou write for that will be kinky! I was wondering when the next part of that was coming out, its one of the darker fics that I have really truly enjoyed ;)
Stay a perfect writer forever! :'D

name_undecided January 31 2012, 05:36:07 UTC

Holy shit.
thatwassofuckinghot
Seriously, from beginning to end I was in full out Perv Mode.
I loved this. It was perfect. :D

Also, I imagined Anthony in a uniform because he reminded me of one of those schoolgirls. XD

saint_elsewhere January 31 2012, 07:05:16 UTC

That was deliciously kinky. I have been studying for my exams all day, and this was the perfect remedy for a tired mind :)

Write more stuff.... soon :) thank you