Dark Side of the Moon, chapter 5.

Mar 13, 2012 23:38

Whooo, what's up with everybody? I wrote a new chapter for Dark Side of the Moon, yay! This one does not focus very much on the whole D/s thing, but it should have some kinky stuff in it. The plot was sort of kinda inspired by what bewaremypencil suggested in a comment a while back, so thank you!

Title: The Dark Side of the Moon, chapter 5
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smut, smosh, nc-17

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smoshmusic March 13 2012, 23:21:43 UTC
Whoa! A.lot.of.Shit.just.went.down. omg! what happened to Anthony??

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lazah March 14 2012, 00:05:29 UTC
Oh my god, this cliffhanger will drive me crazy till the moment you post the next chapter, so you better hurry uuuup! D; It's that girl, isn't it? Ö

Normal, short translation: Really good, I'm empressed!

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michaelangelo24 March 14 2012, 00:20:01 UTC
Ewww, a girl! Lol, just kidding. xP

You are like the master of sex scenes. Every one is so different and kinky. ;)

Just one thing I noticed; you accidentally added an extra "the" at this one part: "The moment he was done Ian went back to writing the the script that also needed to be done for tomorrow."

You did not just leave me with a cliffhanger?!? Get back here and finish the story now! D:

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terryn99 March 14 2012, 01:35:47 UTC
I bet it was that low life that raped Ian

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rahhicecream March 14 2012, 01:53:51 UTC
HOLY CRAP! I have a feeling I know what's coming next! I missed this story!!! Haha when she said "besides, who would believe me?" I laughed and immediately thought WE WOULD BELIEVE YOU!!! :D

GAHHH This story is SOOOOOO good!

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