The Devil You Know - Part 3

[mercurial_muse]

The Devil You Know - Part 3

By: mercurial_muse
Fandom: The Devil Wears Prada (film)
Pairing: Miranda/Andy
Archive: Please ask first.
Rating: M/NC-17
Disclaimer: These characters are owned by Lauren Weisberger and 20th-century Fox, not me. Please don't sue me. Seriously... I'm too poor for it to be worth your while.
Summary: Miranda Priestly has

Comments

[kitnkabootle]

Your imagery is amazing.

"Something raged within Miranda and she struggled against the silken ties binding her wrists so violently that Andy almost lost her hold, "

God it's good. And I really like the way you leave Miranda in doubt at the end. It's so bittersweet to imagine Miranda, so physically sated and yet completely frightened that she may lose Andy totally. Wow... just.... guh.

*bows to the writing goddess*

[mercurial_muse]

At first I was a little worried about mentioning Miranda's doubt at the end, because I didn't want to ruin the moment. But I thought it was important to show that, because of the choices she has made, every bit of joy Miranda feels is matched by an equal degree of heartache. Thanks for the compliments, hun!

[sherlock_adams]

Breathtaking, seriously..

I could honestly see all that happening and couldn't help but chuckle when Andy goes 'Since you asked so nicely'

Can't wait for more =)

[mercurial_muse]

More is on the way! :) I hope to have Part 4 out sometime on Wednesday. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

[eternalnightday]

Wow, this is really good.
Like kitnkabootle's fic I also love your attention to detail. The description and imagery was so vivid that I can actually see it in my mind. You are quickly becoming one of my favourites! :)

I also like the fact that even though you have written an amazing love scene, you also added on Miranda's doubts in the end. It's like coming back to reality (don't think I'm making sense now o.O)
Well done and I look forward to more soon ;-)

[mercurial_muse]

Oh, wow! I am grinning like mad over your compliments and, other than that, I don't know what else to say. Thanks so much!

[jintymac]

Wow, this chapter was sensual and extremely hot!

I loved how Andy knew just how much to push Miranda to make her say please and how they both revel in being together. Miranda's doubts at the end were also a great addition as her past must be difficult to get over and I can completely understand how she can still have doubts even although they're both really happy being together.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this will affect things for them either in a positive or negative light ;-) Great work!

[mercurial_muse]

I'm looking forward to seeing how this will affect things for them either in a positive or negative light

You'll be seeing that in Part 4, so you won't have to wait long. :)

[kdsusa3]

Bittersweet. I like it, why is she so sure that Andy will leave?

[mercurial_muse]

She's so sure Andy will leave because of the pact she made with the devil years ago. She willingly sacrificed love for success and has never had a good and lasting relationship since. Even going into what she has with Andy, Miranda knew it was doomed to fail.