"Fool for Love" Spaiku, Part 7: Damnation

[mere_ubu]

Well, I guess I've forestalled tearing off this Band-Aid as long as I possibly can, but I have to admit that I somehow feel personally guilty for dispatching him! Good night, Mr. Pratt. *pets him* Sorry to do this to you. BtVS, S5, PG.  Warning: character death. :(
Previous parts here. Thanks to Mister Beta for playing haiku View-Master with me.
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Comments

[mere_ubu]

Thank you so much! I'm sad to see the little guy go.

[herself_nyc]

I can't believe you felt you needed a character death warning on these. Hee.

They're wonderful. I especially like II. and III. And I.

*skywrites* He's gonna DIE now, okay?

[mere_ubu]

Well, I just didn't want there to be any confusion about what's going to happen next. I would hate for anyone to be unduly alarmed. ;)

Thank you, dear! I had a good time with these. ("Unmanful" is one of my favorite words, and I've been itching to use it!)

[willowgreen]

I think the last one is my favorite, but they're all great.

[mere_ubu]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you like that one; I wanted to sneak a little Spike in there somewhere. I've missed him!

[mere_ubu]

Heh-heh. I didn't want to be too mean-spirited, but it really did seem as though his mother needed to make an appearance in there somewhere. *hugs* Your lovely feedback makes me grin. :D

[stars_of_tears]

I absolutely love II :)
the line "poetry fails him" is just gorgeous

[mere_ubu]

Thank you, darling! I'm glad that you're still enjoying these.