"Fool for Love" Spaiku, Part 8: Fabrication

[mere_ubu]

Bless me, LJ, for I have sinned. It has been thirty-six days since my last Spaiku post. Grant me absolution, and I will vow to post a weekly batch henceforth. Onward! Another interlude wherein Spike and Buffy Bicker at the Bronze--this time about vampirism as a profound existential experience--before the continuation of Spike's completely truthful

Comments

[missmurchison]

Yay! Spaiku!

I am in love with the last two.

[mere_ubu]

Thank you! I am in love with the fact that you found them "yay"-worthy! I've been getting so weirdly detailed with these that I've taken to joking that, sooner or later, I'd end up writing one just about Spike chalking a pool cue. And here it is!

[gillo]

Persona in place,

Perfect line! You "get" our boy so beautifully every time.

[mere_ubu]

Thank you so much! I really couldn't ask for a better compliment than that, and I'm delighted that you think so. :D

[rebcake]

It's so hard to choose; good thing I don't have to! Faded/radiant, thread/embroider, no idea/no contest/not diet. All so balanced and well said. *sniff*

[mere_ubu]

Wow, thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm so glad that you enjoyed them. *sniff* Dangit, don't get me started again, woman. I'm a frail flower! ;)

[petzipellepingo]

Trade a faded life
for radiant living death?

Yes, such a Spike notion because he's just so ashamed of being William.

[mere_ubu]

*nods* As much as I privately complain about Spike's portrayal in AtS, I'm so in love his poetry slam moment in NFA when he embraces the William within. What a lovely last private moment for his character.

Thank you for reading, dear!

[moscow_watcher]

Yay for more Spaiku!
radiant living death - perfect description of Spike.

[mere_ubu]

Yay for your feedback! Thank you, sweetie. I'm glad that you liked these! :D