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mere_ubu

Flash Challenge Spaiku

Nov 06, 2008 21:35

For this week's fantas_magoria "School Hard" Flash Challenge: "Spike has fought two Slayers in the last century, and... he's killed them both." says Giles. Write a haiku poem for each of those incidents.
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( two spaiku: two slayers )

phantasmagoria challenge, btvs:spike, spaiku, btvs: s5

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carlyinrome November 7 2008, 04:42:23 UTC

Nicely done.

mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:48:35 UTC

Thank you very much!

stars_of_tears November 7 2008, 05:30:01 UTC

Yay for more Spaiku!
Is Spike always inspiring?
Nice execution! :)

mere_ubu November 7 2008, 15:38:23 UTC

Another haiku!
Spike never fails to inspire
tiny word pictures.

Thank you, dear. Happy Friday! :D

ares132006 November 7 2008, 05:40:44 UTC

He was meant for this.

Very powerful, indeed.

mere_ubu November 7 2008, 15:40:35 UTC

Thank you so much!

powerofthebook November 7 2008, 07:03:03 UTC

Oooh. Tingly-good. Something very prophetic about those lines...

mere_ubu November 8 2008, 02:42:00 UTC

Wow, thank you! I think I was playing with the idea of Spike having been "called." And that's the first "tingly-good" I've ever gotten. Mind if I frame it and hang it on my wall? :D

Happy Friday to youuu!

petzipellepingo November 7 2008, 09:42:23 UTC

Assumes a new name
with his foe’s leather mantle:
Slayer of Slayers.

Yup, the Legendary Dark Warrior is born.

mere_ubu November 8 2008, 02:43:39 UTC

Thank you, Petzi! Have a great weekend. :)