I think I made my preference clear in my comment about Chapter 10. I enjoy reading about ALL of the different couples and cross-connections. While one couple may take center stage for a few chapters, or plot twist, I think it makes for a fuller story to include everyone. While it may have started as a Brian-meets-Justin, and they fall in love story, it has metamorphosed into something much more grand. You have created some very original and engaging new characters. While the core is still the same, the new world you have developed has taken over.
In my opinion, the real decision is yours to make. I want to thank you for asking your readers what they think, but in the end you are the captain and we are the happy passengers. I have a feeling you know the best route to take during this amazing trip. I just plan to sit back, sip my cool drink, and enjoy the ride.
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In my opinion, the real decision is yours to make. I want to thank you for asking your readers what they think, but in the end you are the captain and we are the happy passengers. I have a feeling you know the best route to take during this amazing trip. I just plan to sit back, sip my cool drink, and enjoy the ride.
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