Ficlet: A Night To Remember....Or Not

[merisel_1]

Title: A Night To Remember....Or Not

Author: Merisel

Summary: Mikaela has a little adventure with The Twins

Characters: Mikaela, Skids, Mudflap, mention of Wheelie

Author's Note: This does contain brief [non-con] smut.

Comments

[chai16]

This was wonderfully terrible! I almost want them to try again with the poor traumatized girl. You certainly made the twins not only in character but just the right kind of obnoxious to make reading them more then just tolerable. I especially like the mention that she makes them stop before she actually does maybe like it. Even in a few words you painted the picture of what was happening almost too vividly. I loved it far more then i probably ever should.

[merisel_1]

Heheh. Poor Mikaela. The twins were just too naive (or dumb) to realize they weren't being helpful. o_O

[chai16]

I'd say "at least they meant well" but i doubt that's true too. They arrived bored, curious and with alcohol. No way that evening could have ended well for her. And the sick bastard that i am wants to see them more successful the next time around *facedesk*

[merisel_1]

*Snerks* Not with Mikaela, they won't. :p