Title: Cheeseburger

Sep 06, 2010 13:31


Title: Cheeseburger

Author: Merisel

Disclaimer: The Autobots belong to someone else. OC Malena Banes belongs to Caz

Warning: Smut

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challenge, movie verse, rated: r

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mmouse15 September 6 2010, 21:27:00 UTC
Mwahahahaha!

Oh, damn, that was hilarious, Meri! Lena thought she was dreaming and...wow, Bee, I hope you had just as good a time as she did!

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merisel_1 September 6 2010, 22:15:36 UTC
*Snerks* Thanks.

Bee was definitely feeling frisky. ^.^

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silverwolf September 6 2010, 22:02:45 UTC
ROTFL

These fics are always too much fun to be legal!

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merisel_1 September 6 2010, 22:15:58 UTC
*Evil grin* Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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bluetaelon September 6 2010, 22:44:24 UTC
ROTFLOL! That is just wrong! :D

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merisel_1 September 7 2010, 01:05:43 UTC
Oh, I know, but it's so fun, too! :D

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chai16 September 7 2010, 00:01:06 UTC
I love the way you write Lena. You do her great justice in this and really have fun with the situation. Gotta admit, seeing Bee instead of ratchet for this was a downer. But then you totally made it worth my while (and hers) with how you progressed the scene. Phenomenally done

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merisel_1 September 7 2010, 01:07:30 UTC
> I love the way you write Lena. You do her great justice
> in this and really have fun with the situation.

*Blush* Thanks!

> Gotta admit, seeing Bee instead of ratchet for this was a > downer. But then you totally made it worth my while (and > hers) with how you progressed the scene. Phenomenally done

:D Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! And Bee thanks you, too. ^_^

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cyclonedancer September 7 2010, 02:14:17 UTC
Wow! Nice writing. I was pouting when I saw Ratchet was not going to it, but Bee sure came through.

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merisel_1 September 7 2010, 02:58:31 UTC
Heheh. Yeah, I figured Ratchet gets enough action in that department. ;)

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