February writing challenge: day 14

[merith]

Comments

[questofdreams]

oooh I LOVE action! And Duo in action even more ^_~ That was awesome. Even in its brevity, it delivered swift and powerful emotion and the ending GAWD the ending. DUO <3<3

[merith]

oh, i wish i could write action more... i'm just not very comfortable in writing it. but, thank you! since these are 5 sentence fics, it's a little hard to be anything but brief, and hope the idea and emotion comes through. :)

thanks for reading!

[mmariep2]

Wow. I held my breath through the entire thing. So much there in so little. Haha, but I guess thats the point. That was great.

[merith]

yeah, it is sort of the point to these 5 sentence fics. :) i'm so happy you liked this one! it was fun to write.

thanks for reading!

[tyreling]

Oooh! This was really exciting to read. Love how the words manage to fit the pacing for an action ficlet.

[merith]

hehe, that's about as much as i can write in action. :) glad the excitement came through!

thanks for reading.