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[merith]

title: experimental game, pairings: heero/duo, (implied) trowa/quatre, relena/hilde (sort of), warnings: shoujo ai (that's girl-love, non-yuri), BL, language
notes: written for the hell of it, most of it during the writathon (12 hrs sunday, 7/13), and completely inspired by katy perry's i kissed a girl (this is a download link for the song).

Comments

[sunhawk16]

It's funny... I just heard that song for the first time this last week! That was just such a great 'group' shot of them all. I liked how Duo started the ball rolling and then was just so shocked when it got out of his control. *grin* I particularly liked his characterization in this; such a typical 'big brother' reaction! Wonderful story, as always. ^____^

[merith]

hee! i just heard the song for the first time last week as well... and yeah, me and some songs just can't be parted. it begged me to use it in a story.

i love it when the boys are friends or 'big bothers' to relena, and she can be accepting of their relationship. and most of the time (in my stories), duo is always trying to get relena to loosen up, to do fun things and not work so hard.

things do have a way of getting away from duo, don't they?

[femaleshinigami]

Wow, must say this was great :) You portraye Relena very well, especialy when she was acting tipsy :) And Duo's reaction when she kissed him... *laughs again* Honestly there is so much I liked in this fic... The way you make the characters is very natural, the flow of the story is great, and I do enjoy stories where Relena tries to be a normal girl her age :) It was a sweet thing to read, and the jokes had me laughing like a fic hadn't made me in a long, long time... The God-pennis complex... I laughed out loud and almost woke up the rest of the fammily :P

Thanks for writing this and sharing it with everybody :)

*hugs*

[merith]

well thank you! i love to read about a strong relena, a human relena having real relationships with those around her. and i just adore it when duo attempts to make her have fun (even if it can backfire on him). and for the boys to be friends with her. :) it's fun, and i enjoy it, so it makes me happy when others enjoy it as well.

heh, i could so see duo talking about size, and alluding to his size in particular, in the right company, that is.

*hugs* thanks for reading!

[eg06]

lol XD

this story amused me to no end. I could just picture prim and proper Vice Minister Relena getting buzzed on daquiris and kissing another girl. This was such a cute story and I loved how you characterized everyone. Especially Relena, I like Relena and this is how I like to see her. Nicely done!

[eg06]

(oh yeah)
and I love that song too. ^_^

[merith]

me too! it really caught my attention a couple of days ago, and just wouldn't let me go.

[merith]

i like writing relena like this a lot as well. i think she'd make a really great friend, if given half a chance.

thanks so much for reading!

[miyun]

8D love!

[merith]

hee! you like huh? ;)

[miyun]

yes!yes! much like-y. XDD

[merith]

woohoo! i'm glad. ♥

and, i'm thinking i like your icon muchly too!

[lil_1337]

I love seeing Relena get the chance to be "normal" and live life as a kid. It's something they all need don't get enough opportunities to do.

[merith]

yeah, the gw kids and 'normal' doesn't usually happen does it? though her life has never been normal and always in the public eye, relena doesn't get a break. poor girl.

thanks for reading!