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merith

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Jul 14, 2008 17:42

title: from the ashes, pairings/characters: trowa, dorothy (non-pairing), warnings: mention of personal violence, hints of rape
notes: written for the gw500 2 character challenge for trowa and dorothy.

( But, before him, the woman waited, and she was his to interview. )

Comments 10

sunhawk16 July 14 2008, 23:59:58 UTC

Oh yeah... Dorothy would totally take care of that sort of thing herself, and I'm quite sure she will be thorough and very neat about it. ^____^
Good one!

merith July 15 2008, 01:09:57 UTC

yeah, i'm pretty sure if she had the chance, that little problem would be quite taken care of.

thanks, sunny! :)

merula31 July 15 2008, 00:14:16 UTC

How very Doro! Great job!

merith July 15 2008, 01:09:04 UTC

thanks! not quite sure where this came from, but dorothy definitely wanted to be heard (and it's been awhile for her from me).

thanks for reading!

dirtyoldlady July 15 2008, 01:14:10 UTC

Beautiful! :D I can so see Dorothy taking matters into her own hands, and from Trowa's perspective... really, justice was served. :)

merith July 15 2008, 01:43:02 UTC

oh thank you! yeah, i can see dorothy making sure the bastard doesn't breathe for long, and trowa... he's still a mercenary at heart, and knows justice when he sees it.

thank you for reading!

darthanne July 15 2008, 03:03:41 UTC

I enjoyed this. Very in character for both of them, and Trowa's reaction was very him, torn between his own feelings, their past and what had happened.

merith July 15 2008, 11:13:38 UTC

i can so see trowa torn where she's concerned, though time and separation would help ease some of the potential conflict.

thanks for reading, anne. :) i'm glad you liked it!

sharona1x2 July 15 2008, 07:11:04 UTC

That was very chilling to me. Dorothy was perfectly in character, and I can see her taking care of her own business. I really like the way you wrote Trowa, too. Their relationship is always so complicated.

merith July 15 2008, 11:11:30 UTC

chilling, yes. and dorothy would do everything to take care of herself, of things her way if at all possible. trowa would try to help break her out of that, even knowing he wouldn't succeed.

not quite sure where this one came from. just, when the pairings popped up, the idea was there, and i had to write it. it has been awhile since i wrote anything dorothy, and i think she was getting impatient with me. :)

thanks for reading, sharon!