Comments | meritjubet: [Fic: GW] Wary

meritjubet

[Fic: GW] Wary

Feb 09, 2008 17:17

Title: Wary
Fandom: GW
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Quatre/Trowa, Dorothy
Notes: AU. Young businessman Quatre Winner is having a hard time making up his mind.

***

"I didn't know genies existed," Quatre said calmly, which all things considered, was quite admirable.

The genie shrugged, one bright green eye still only visible. "We're a little like ( Read more... )

fic: gw, fic: all

Comments 10

lil_1337 February 9 2008, 07:27:47 UTC

I loved this for so many reasons! It was a lovely story with great dialogue and the ending was perfect.

meritjubet February 9 2008, 09:56:42 UTC

I'm happy that you enjoyed it, Lil! :) I can get sappy with endings but they make me smile anyhow.

sharona1x2 February 9 2008, 11:49:39 UTC

That was such a cute story! I knew Quatre wouldn't ask for something frivolous, but I wasn't sure exactly what he'd ask for. I should have known it would involve Trowa staying with him for good.

Hopefully at some point, Quatre will get Trowa to dress up in silk scraps and gold chains. That'd be hot.

meritjubet February 9 2008, 12:02:18 UTC

Heh, thanks ^___^ I thought it was the only thing he could ask for and for this fic to remain fluffy.

Quatre was certainly interested about that, for sure! :)

misanagi February 9 2008, 18:05:01 UTC

I really, really like this! Both Quatre and Trowa re so great here and the interactions are wonderful I love the humor an the whole setting. How your voice gave a story we know an original taste and a very wonderful one at that.

meritjubet February 10 2008, 02:05:41 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked :) It was fun writing this as well. Thanks for the comment!

dentelle_noir February 11 2008, 05:20:36 UTC

Not sure how I missed this earlier, but mo GOD it was HIllARIOUS! I LOVED the overture of the Unions! It was hillarious! And I'm so glad that Quatre was smart and wished Trowa to be HUMAN, and not just free. How terrible if Trowa had to walk the earth for eons while Quatre's dead and gone.... Great thinking on Quatre's part! And I LOVED doro in this! I swear, I laughed the WHOLE way through this!

meritjubet February 11 2008, 23:55:40 UTC

That's great! ^____^ the unions were fun to write about. Quatre's smart, of course he wasn't going let Trowa away! Thanks for the comment!

tyreling November 12 2008, 03:10:31 UTC

Although I'm kind of late for this *laughs nervously* I really thought this was pretty well done. A simple spin off of Aladdin, but with different kinds of features. I love how they slowly grew to actually bond with one another. <33

meritjubet November 12 2008, 08:31:09 UTC

Never too late to comment, trust me! I'm glad people can enjoy reading my fics :D