[Fic: GW] A Form of Madness

Feb 16, 2008 00:08

Title: A Form of Madness
Fandom: GW
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Quatre+Trowa, Wufei, Relena, Mariemaia
Warnings: Characters death (off scene, not one of the pilots), angst
Summary: Quatre held up his hand and recited the oath Une had written. The words were like cardboard in his mouth. The oath had been meant for the far future, not now, not ( Read more... )

fic: gw, fic: all

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misanagi February 15 2008, 15:15:40 UTC
This was very powerful. You did a marvelous job showing so many complexities in this story. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing.

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meritjubet February 16 2008, 01:43:04 UTC
It was surprising how quickly all of this came out. I wrote this out practically in one sitting and then I was like, wow, dinner already? *looks at time* oh.

Thanks.

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lil_1337 February 15 2008, 16:35:06 UTC
That was really sad, though with a nice upbeat ending. I do a wonderful job of writing Marimaia.

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meritjubet February 16 2008, 01:43:50 UTC
Thanks.

Yes, you do? *g* I think I get what you're saying anyway, Lil!

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lil_1337 February 16 2008, 01:52:46 UTC
*headdesk* I think /you/ do. *note to self* Sleep first then reply.

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meritjubet February 16 2008, 06:07:17 UTC
I was a bit wtf for a brief moment. Never knew you were so egotistical! XD but then I realised what you meant and not what you had said.

Anyway, I've made heaps of mistakes in comments. It's embarrassing, especially after you catch them once you hit the post comment button.

*snugs*

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ramenkuri February 15 2008, 18:15:55 UTC
So good! Melancholy and sadness but laughter too. Poor Relena!

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meritjubet February 16 2008, 01:44:33 UTC
Poor Relena, she was sort of outside of knowing everything and so felt the guilt more.

Thanks for reading.

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jess_eklom February 16 2008, 06:52:11 UTC
Wow... that was heavy....

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meritjubet February 16 2008, 07:12:36 UTC
Yes. Thanks for reading.

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sharona1x2 February 17 2008, 10:40:02 UTC
I really like the way you structured this. All the pieces fit so well together. This was an excellent story.

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meritjubet February 17 2008, 13:31:58 UTC
Thanks! There wasn't too much thought, all the pieces just flowed from my brain to my fingers (which is great when it happens, though usually is rare). I'm actually surprised that you read this, I thought you had an aversion to death fics!

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sharona1x2 February 17 2008, 20:03:41 UTC
I do have an aversion to death fics, if the death takes place on camera, so to speak. Also, I'm more bothered when it's one of the guys dying, especially Heero or Duo.

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