[Narnia] Cradled by the Oak [Bacchus/Edmund] [R]

[meritjubet]

Title: Cradled by the Oak
Fandom: Narnia
Pairing: Bacchus/Edmund
Rating: R
Word Count: 2000+
Summary: Edmund has a headache.
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Notes: for the very dear, forochel . Yes, you can totally blame her for making me write this *g* Pretty much pure pr0n, so enjoy!

Comments

[forochel]

SEX MAGIC. I STILL AM REELING FROM THAT. Can you imagine, on the Dawn Treader, Edmund drinks of Bacchus' wine and GETS A RAGING ERECTION. Because Bacchus is a terribly cruel tease. Also, revenge.

OH MY GOD, JEM. THIS IS SO HOT. D: And it's not even all that explicit! I love the attention to detail you have, all the details AROUND them, the descriptions.

/o\ And I understand how hard it is to think when you're writing porn (my head would combust if I actually used my brain when porning) but sometimes the tone of a sentence here or there doesn't fit, or a word doesn't fit into the ... um, epic sex. That is going on.

STILL. WINE THAT TASTES OF A KISS. My favourite line! ♥

[meritjubet]

It wasn't magic! It was godliness! Which, naturally, involves Bacchus teasing Edmund.

THIS IS SO HOT. D: why the sadface? I'm terrible at writing explicit sex, so I tend not to write it. I guess practice makes perfect? Hee XD

Noted :DD In the distant future, when I pr0n again, I shall strive for pr0nier heights! I was trying to create an overwhelming experience and I guess I slipped into purple prose a tad >.>'

Glad you enjoyed!

[forochel]

...But wasn't he using magic? XD Oh, Bacchus. I love you and your laundry-burdening ways. All the laundry Narnians must be like, "You'd think Edmund the Spymaster would choose a lover more discreet", and then Edmund's spy-within-the-laundry will bring this back to Edmund, and Edmund will be like, *rolls eyes* "It was not I who did the choosing."

PRACTICE WORKS! To a certain extent! And then you find yourself completely immune and disinterested in porn. Seriously, there was this dry spell when I just skipped past the porn bits in fics.

It's not the pronier heights, really! You did create a really overwhelming experience! Just tiny stylistic issues and diction here and there that jarred. A bit. Are you posting this on narnia_slash?

[meritjubet]

Is it magic when a god uses it? Hmm. I always thought that magic was a more human power, while the gods had their own special powers. Which, of course, can be called magic. I'm just being selective about the word! Oh yes :D but I bet his spy-within-the-gardens got a bit of surprise tonight! Heh.

...*pities you* oh okay, sometimes I skip the porn. Cos some people write great, epic sort of fics and yet their romantic scenes are lacking. And I love a 100 000 word multi-parter as much as the next fangirl.

Oh okay. I'm really out of practice of writing, stupid university >.> degrading my skillz! (On the other hand, if had requested an essay on Bacchus/Edmund :P) Yep.

[eci_frog]

Unbelivable hot!

[meritjubet]

:D glad you enjoyed!