Fanfic: For what it's worth, Chapter 4/?

[merlebelacqua]

Title: For what it's worth - Chapter 4: Stolen Kisses
Words: 2317 (They just keep getting longer!)
Fandom: Torchwood/Doctor Who
Author: Me, obviously
Characters: Jack Harkness, OC
Rating: R, later chapters will be NC-17
Summary: There were only few people that he felt obliged to say farewell to and even less that he felt able to face right now. Actually

Comments

[adafrog]

Oh Jack. *hugs him, then proceeds to slap the Doctor*

[merlebelacqua]

*joins in the hug*
Yeah, the Doctor deserves a good punch. Evil screenwriters.

[enchantersnight]

Oh dear, this is not going to be nice at all is it. *Awaits next chapter fearfully*

[merlebelacqua]

I'm quite afraid so. Hope you still like it though.

[enchantersnight]

Oh I am sure I will enjoy it, I just might not like myself for enjoying it!

[merlebelacqua]

I think there are far worse guilty pleasures. I've hear of this thing called "Reality TV"... ;)

[ladykoori]

Oh......Jack what have you gotten yourself into?

I actually like how you've draw the first bit of the story out, increases the dread.

[merlebelacqua]

Thanks. I just wanted to give Jack someone to talk to and I thought that it might be more realistic if he had made a friend in the weeks he spend in the city. Whichever city it is. And, though I can't say that for sure, this may not have been the last we've seen of Chris.
"You're just making this up as you go along!" - "Yep! But I do it brilliantly!"

[fun_sized_one]

eep.....I should be ashamed for enjoying it, even this early lol

[merlebelacqua]

Don't be. We are all in the gutter here. ;) But seriously, good to see that you're enjoying it, that always makes me happy.

[kephisos]

...Wow. *loves!*

Ooh, I want to see more of this. :D

[merlebelacqua]

*headdesk*
Sorry, I totally overlooked your comment. More is coming. Eh... soon. Yes.