Fanfic: Blackouts

[merlebelacqua]

He needs some time to take in what he’s seeing. A blue police box fading away. The Tardis fading away. The Doctor leaving. The Doctor leaving him behind on a space station.

He waits, hopes, telling himself that the Doctor just went to collect Rose and will come back for him. But the tiny, evil part of his consciousness, telling him that he’s been

Comments

[sparklyglampire]

Oooh, this is great! :D
Though one thing I noticed: 'paying the prize.' I'm thinking you meant 'paying the price', right? :P
I loved it though! And your English was perfect! I can't even imagine trying to write a fic in German :P (especially since my knowledge of German is limited to 'Hilfe, hilfe! Haifisch!' HAHA!)

Anyway, this is brilliant :D

[merlebelacqua]

Thanks for loving it and for the tip, I changed it. And at least you have a good chance of survival if you are ever attacked by sharks on a German shore. ;)

[boji]

He missed his destination by 132 miles and more than 60 years.

This is a really, really good premise, anything from a temporal paradox to a groundhog day from hell. Any chance of more?

[merlebelacqua]

I doubt that I'll do a follow-up, since I'm quite ignorant of recent history and would probably have a factual error in every sentence. I may, however, pick out some scenes from those 5+ years he spend travelling on earth and through space for further analysis. Even if it means that I'll have to write dialogue. *shudder*

[kephisos]

Very, very good, expecially if English isn't your first language, as I know it's very hard to learn. :P

Brillant. I love it. :D

[merlebelacqua]

Thank you very much, I'm glad that you like it! :)