Merlin Fanfiction: The T-Shirt Told Me To Do It

[merlinmonster]

 

Comments

[xmarie08]

Aww, so cute! Bradley's totally the type to refuse to back down from a bet.

[merlinmonster]

lol I thought so too. I'm glad that you liked it.

[merlinmonster]

Aw thank you

[ems]

The idea for this fic is absolutely adorable and really original, and you've also got some lovely characterisation in here (Apart from the gummy bears. He probably just wanted those. -- LOVED this). Do you have a beta? It could do with a smidgey bit of proof-reading/editing -- just for punctuation and grammar, really -- nothing massive, but it would just polish it up a little and make it perfect. That's my only piece of constructive criticism; otherwise I thought this was so cute. :) Would be happy to volunteer my services, too, if you like! xx

[merlinmonster]

Yes I do have a beta now but thanks for the offer. She's finally got her act together and replied to my messages lol. I'm so happy you liked it XD

[ems]

Good stuff!

I found myself thinking about this fic during work today which is always a good sign. So adorable. :D

[hungry_bkworm91]

I love this!!!

My fav things; Colin's flasher-coat, Bradley's utter determination to win the bet, the amazing slogany t-shirts and the girls' reactions....pretty much everything really, lol.

I can't believe this is your first fic.....it's so good and it's so THEM. oh, boys.... :D

[merlinmonster]

Wow thanks very much. I wasn't sure how likely it was that Colin would have a 'flasher coat' but I thought I had to keep it in there and now I am glad I did =)

[hungry_bkworm91]

Colin could flash me any time, coat or not....
*stops imagining quickly and fans self frantically* :D

[merlinmonster]

lol what a great image mmmmm

[nekochi_life]

Kyaaaa!
I love this, so cute :3 :3 :3

Stubborn!Bradley and Tease!Colin are the best :D

Your first fic? WOW, you're really good.

THANK YOU FOR THIS!!!♥♥♥

[merlinmonster]

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it