Your Lips are Posion//Original Story

[mermaid_face]

Okay, I'm writing this tory that I will post on dA eventually.

It's about my character--Bianca St.Claire--and my friend's character--Daniel "Cheshire" Slaughter.

Mind you, she chose his last name.

Not I.

Anyhoo, I just want to know what you think of it thus far.

I'm not done.

Not by a long shot.

But, just tell me what you think.

Constructive criticism and

Comments

[gummywummydrops]

Oh snap I really like it!!!!!!!!

I wanna see how it ends!!!!!!!!!!!

[mermaid_face]

Whoo!
Yehyuh!
Don't worry, then end is coming soon.
I'll post the whole thing up when I'm done.