*stares speechlessly for a moment* That, was, wow, that was so so so good. At first I thought you just missed one letter, then I thought it was on purpose and it was so extremely clever cause it fit the poem so well, then I saw the broken keyboard line and thought it all the more clever. I had an open mouthed smile all through reading this. Your word selection is softly rhythmic, the missing letters conveys a sense of a seemingly impossible desire as if you've been teased and need to know what the words really say, the imagery is pervasive and somewhat haunting. So deeply smooth.
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