Comments | mermaidfangs: fic or something

mermaidfangs

fic or something

Nov 28, 2012 23:04

Title: My Foes Exult When I Totter, My Heart Exults in Your Deliverance
Characters: Kara/Laura, Cain, Laura POV
Summary: Kind of an AU take on Pegasus, etc, loosely inspired by Ray-boo's fic and something I wrote but am too embarrassed to post.
Words: 2800
Rating: MA
Warnings: violence, rape/sexual assault

A/N: I want ALL THE REWARDS because I ( Read more... )

tw: violence, fic, char: helena cain, char: kara thrace, char: laura roslin, bsg fic, tw: rape, pairing: laura roslin/kara thrace, fandom: bsg

Comments 19

baliao November 30 2012, 04:45:15 UTC

Wow. I wish I could write like that. That's some serious talent right there. You should write a novel!

It's really badass that you wrote all that on your phone! Recently I've been doing most of my writing for school on my galaxy tab. Keymonk and Jota+ make a wicked combo.

mermaidfangs November 30 2012, 15:24:38 UTC

<3 <3 Aw, thank you so much, boo. I appreciate that. Now if only I could channel it into some Kara/Kendra :p

You should write a novel!

Hee, I have!

I really want to get a tablet, but I've heard bad things about the word processing abilities, and that's basically the only reason I'd want to get one, so I wouldn't have to drag my laptop out whenever I want to write away from the house.

baliao November 30 2012, 17:20:03 UTC

You wrote a novel! That's fantastic! I must have missed it. Belated congratulations ( ... )

fragrantwoods November 30 2012, 14:20:57 UTC

Took a while to process this--my comment is going to be inadequate for your fic. It's so real and touches so many sore spots.
This broke my heart and made me cry, NGL.
Laura resents her selfishness because had she been able to endure more, Kara might have been spared whatever beating that did that, and why are the gods punishing Kara for Laura's weakness?
and this:
Distracted, she'd forgot to hold them in. It's late. She's tired.
There's so much more. You're so frakking good at finding the dark commonalities that are out there and dragging them into the light, and then letting Laura and Kara hug them away.

All The Awards to you :-) For All The Reasons.

mermaidfangs November 30 2012, 15:31:34 UTC

*huggles* Yes, this one was difficult, wasn't it? There is something so fearless about Laura that makes it even harder to stomach what she's going through.

Laura is nowhere near selfish, but because she considers herself responsible for the whole frakking world, nothing she does is ever completely enough. *pets*

Annnnyway, thank you so much, dearie. I appreciate it so much.