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nekogirl_beth16 in mero_nia

A Oneshot

Feb 06, 2009 21:22

Hello everyone!
This is my only Mello/Near fiction that I have written. It's a oneshot, and not terribly great but... I hope you enjoy my meagre offering anyway!

Pairing: Mello/Near
Rating: T (Work safe)
Warnings: Shonen-ai, character death, songfic

Disclaimer: I do not own Death Note or the song 'Before the Dawn' by Evanescence.

Bittersweet (Before the ( Read more... )

fanfic

Comments 4

kurosaki_akane February 6 2009, 21:16:07 UTC

This is so heartbreaking. Every part of it is. I had a knot in my stomach while I was reading it, knowing how it was going to end; Near knew, too, hence his silence.
His words when he finally decided to speak couldn't be sadder and more fitting for him (T_T)

You did a very wonderful job! Thank you very much for posting this.

nekogirl_beth16 February 7 2009, 01:46:02 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! :D

pinksubstance February 7 2009, 10:45:35 UTC

God This is so beautiful and sad, you captured a lot of feelings in very few words, it was so intense... I had to fight back tears reading it, it always the same when I read Near's POV T_T But it made me feel kind of... happy to think that at least, he can "be" with Mello in his mind, or in his dreams. It something at least but... Very sad after all.
I loved it, thank you for posting it!

I'm so sorry about my bad english, it's not my first language ^^'

nekogirl_beth16 February 10 2009, 00:37:47 UTC

THank you! I'm glad my writing can evoke such emotion in readers. (And I totally agree, it is sad, but there's a sort of happiness in that he can still 'be' with Mello in a way. That's why I called the fic 'Bittersweet'. xD)

Your English is quite fine, your spelling is better than half my (Australian) English class was!! :3