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The Pain Study

Nov 15, 2010 15:36

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brenna yovanoff, fiction by brenna

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ext_240959 November 16 2010, 15:17:52 UTC

Got my first chill at, "You should never take candy from strangers." Great job!

-- Donna Gambale

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 19:04:22 UTC

Thanks! Sometimes, I am all about the ominous :)

Wow nitelydeth November 17 2010, 04:46:07 UTC

"Thinking the tests will only be an inconvinience, a momentary discomfort. But I know better." Absolutely brilliant! I agree, the ending sentence really did bring it all together. Awesome!

Re: Wow brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 19:09:54 UTC

Thanks! One of the things I love about Merry Fates is that here, I'm allowed to be fascinated by psychopaths and no one looks at me funny ;)

anonymous November 17 2010, 05:53:18 UTC

LOVE IT!!

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 18:47:19 UTC

Thanks!

hellife_gal November 17 2010, 08:21:12 UTC

I loved the mood... It was quiet, and I was constantly expecting something LOUD that didn't come.

... a person can go home dead, even when their heart's still beating.

brennayovanoff November 17 2010, 19:00:55 UTC

I was constantly expecting something LOUD that didn't come.

I know! It seems like lately I've been writing about dead bodies and magical powers and things on fire, and it turned out that this just . . . wasn't like that at all.

double_t_t November 17 2010, 20:01:51 UTC

Awesome writing!