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bethrevis June 28 2011, 00:32:53 UTC
I LIKE YOUR USE OF LETTERS, HOW THEY FORM WORDS AND STUFF.

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myramcentire June 28 2011, 16:26:50 UTC
Smart ass. :P

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bethrevis June 28 2011, 16:49:38 UTC
I was hoping you'd notice. :)

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carrharr June 28 2011, 19:40:00 UTC
Beth stole my comment!

STEALER.

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sherwood21 June 28 2011, 17:18:05 UTC
I liked it, and was intrigued, and then I got to the last line and HOLY CRAP YOU GAVE ME THE HEEBIE-JEEBIES.

And I loved it. ^_^

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frogfaeriex6 June 28 2011, 18:47:22 UTC
I liked how she bought her Teaberry gum when she got out, kind of showing to the world she wasn't beat. She seems feisty, I hope she does gets her cousin, snakes are almost as bad as spiders! Great ending, I'm dying to know what comes out of the ashes!

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gretchen_mcneil June 28 2011, 19:35:55 UTC
LOVED IT!!!!

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ext_689450 June 28 2011, 20:56:04 UTC
Loved this! Great description -- unsettling, powerful.

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