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Fiction by Tessa: "Girl, Waiting"

Aug 17, 2011 11:49

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rowangolightly August 17 2011, 18:34:57 UTC

Wow. Damn.

tessagratton August 17 2011, 18:42:02 UTC

Why thank you!

bre2004 August 17 2011, 20:35:13 UTC

Wow. Just wow. So many visuals and gorgeous descriptions and my reaction... "Whoa." :P

Loved this! --> "Eyes never touching my face, he tears a long strip free. It is the loudest sound in the room, the shredding of my dignity." What a fabulous line!

tessagratton August 17 2011, 20:47:14 UTC

Thank you! :D

I JUST NOW REALIZED THAT LINE YOU QUOTED FREAKING RHYMES. *headdesk*

bre2004 August 17 2011, 21:04:16 UTC

LOL! I didn't even notice!

eavanmoore August 17 2011, 23:06:37 UTC

Whoops! At least it doesn't scan, eh?

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tessagratton August 18 2011, 14:58:35 UTC

Thank you! I loooooove playing with ambiguity. Esp in short stories. And an obsessive narrator lets me do fun things with imagery.

redjaywrites August 18 2011, 00:05:30 UTC

Wow. Always love the medieval terminology and very powerful little love triangle. And the ending, oof!

tessagratton August 18 2011, 14:58:44 UTC

Thank you!!! :D

Argh (in a good way...) ext_503007 August 18 2011, 00:38:54 UTC

Another story that leaves me saying "more...mooooorrreeee!" I luff it.

Re: Argh (in a good way...) tessagratton August 18 2011, 14:59:06 UTC

This is the first story in a long time where I thought... I could make this one a novel with two days of brainstorming.... :D Thanks!

Re: Argh (in a good way...) ext_503007 August 18 2011, 22:18:21 UTC

Yes. Start the storming of the brain right away. :)