Brigit's Flame - September - Week 1 entry - Prompt: "Ya Got Trouble"

Sep 04, 2014 08:46

Poetry: Haiku.
Word Count: 13

Rattling door knob,
I slip from my lover's side.
The wife's home early.

poetry, brigits flame

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bluegerl September 8 2014, 17:55:24 UTC
Hurry, best be quick!
Time for him to smooth the sheet.
Where has the wife been?

Teehee. sorry couldn't resist.... but that is a very very telling Haiku. Very telling...lots of backstory! Bless.

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merthin September 19 2014, 02:39:14 UTC
*laughs* Good response. - Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It is greatly appreciated.

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rubyelf September 8 2014, 19:33:30 UTC
Oops...

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merthin September 19 2014, 02:40:22 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. If I could have made the next installment fit, you could have read how much of an 'oops' it was. ;-)

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fawatson September 8 2014, 20:35:33 UTC
Shot and troubled!

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merthin September 19 2014, 02:41:14 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It is appreciated.

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mistvieh September 12 2014, 14:18:55 UTC
Red-handed!

Welcome back, Merthin. I don't think I've seen you in YEARS.

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merthin September 19 2014, 02:44:13 UTC
Mistvieh, alas, no you haven't. Time is a curious commodity. Everyone has the same amount in any given day, yet the way we choose to spend it differs wildly. Alas, I have squandered mine. - Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope you have been well. :-)

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missflyer September 12 2014, 20:03:42 UTC
Uh-oh! Never a good position to be found in... wonder if/how he's (or she's) going to get out of this mess?

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merthin September 19 2014, 02:46:36 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. I had a plan, but it didn't shape up the way I wanted, thus no Razzle-Daszle post. :-s

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missflyer December 2 2014, 22:24:55 UTC
There's always another week -- like this month, it's a bunch of 1 week contests, where you sign up on the BF post here: http://brigits-flame.livejournal.com/1012999.html

So it's like a series of one-shots! Hope to see you there? :)

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Thank you for the reminder. merthin December 3 2014, 19:46:20 UTC
I'm signed up, but we'll have see if I can put more than two words together after the mush my brain has become from NaNoWriMo.

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