Watching her sleep

Jul 09, 2011 11:30

Here's my response to writtensword prompt she gave during the latest ficaton. I dedicate this one to her :D ( Read more... )

mirandy, femslash, fiction

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writtensword July 9 2011, 09:49:02 UTC
Trés manifique!!! :D

I think I may have mentioned already that I loved this, ;-D but I just want to say it again! :D

Mirandy snuggles!!! :D

Miranda's fears of Andy leaving her are realistic in how they manifest themselves when she's tired and exhausted. That's when such thoughts usually strike! I hope one day she can get over her insecurities and understand that Andy truly isn't going anywhere. Until then, I guess Andy will just have to reassure her. A lot. :D

I love your imagery, by the way! Things as "like they were standing together on an unsteady bridge". Nicely done!! :D

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merylpeerts July 9 2011, 22:09:48 UTC
Que-ce que je peux dire, alors ;p
You know, knowing that you (!) of all the people like my writing is busting my self-esteem quite effectively :D I am beyond glad that you enjoy my writing :D
And my imaginary can do much better, I think :D Thank you for helping my out with my grammar :D and with all that stuff ;)
So now, I think i can move on to finish le rest :D XD

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mrpowell July 9 2011, 22:09:42 UTC
very sweet. thank you

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8O lady_orlean July 9 2011, 22:45:49 UTC
That was very emotional and intense.
This insecure Miranda is very touching.
I hope that nightmare will never come true....

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Re: 8O merylpeerts July 9 2011, 22:55:28 UTC
Thank you so much for reading it! :D At some point, I had a hard time to write this, but well... I had this vision in my head and I needed to write it down. I am glad you enjoyed it! :D
Well, I don't think that this nightmare would ever come true. Andy will be always there for Miranda. <3 At least, in my Mirandy's world :D

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Re: 8O merylpeerts July 11 2011, 18:09:01 UTC
Yes, she is very touching, but she's also very irritating like this, at least for me. Every time I read some fic in which she's all insecure I get irritated, because she's usually presented in that way she can't accept the fact that she can be happy Xd and I want her to be happy ;) It's funny that I also written her in that way. XD anyway, I am glad you liked my writing :)

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flyhiwithme2 July 9 2011, 23:19:17 UTC
I've always thought Miranda would be insecure in her personal life based on her actions in the movie relating to Stephen and Andrea. You've brought that to light and made it very believable. Big smile for a happy ending! Thank you.

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goodkitty1331 July 10 2011, 01:37:01 UTC
awww, so sweet!!!
I love it!!!!
thanks for writing it beautifully!!!
:P

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