tw_classic_bb In Demand (part four)

[meshell_mybell]

Comments

[fide_et_spe]

That was such a great story. Really beautiful at the end as well. I hadn't read your other one so have just read both, I really loved them. I loved the way you brought Llinos and Greg to life, and the younger Jack.

This was so tense as well, I kept getting mad at Jack for not checking, at Ianto for not being more observant, it was really well put together.

[meshell_mybell]

Thank you! I'm tickled you went and read the first one as well. I loved writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

[remuslives23]

Fantastic! I skimmed the first story again to remind myself of what happened then came back to this. Wonderful follow up.

[meshell_mybell]

Thank you very much. :D

[firefly124]

Excellent intrigue! Loved this.

[meshell_mybell]

Thank you very much! :D I loved writing it.

[sammydragoncat]

Wonderful story!

[meshell_mybell]

Thank you very much! :D

[evalentine99]

Wow just read both stories back to back. loved the first. And love teh second.

Had me on every word. Glad Jack finally came to his senses and wanted to give him a right good slapping!

Thanks for sharing this

[meshell_mybell]

Thank you very much! Yeah, Jack is a stubborn fool.

[excentric397]

^ What she said. Absolutely.