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[messy_mexico]

oh! i figured I should post this too. I forget how to do LJ cuts so if anyone knows you can tell me and it will be less annoying for you

Comments

[natalierules]

i really really liked that
it was very real and poetic at once.
thanks for posting it
what class was it for or did you write it on your own?

[messy_mexico]

it was for my fiction writing class.
thanks for reading that whole thing -i didn't think anyone would.

i am taking advanced fiction writing next semester and we're going to have to write 40-50 page stories and i don't think i can handle that. this one was about 5-6 and that was hard for me considering i write mostly poetry, short stories and essay type stuff. oh well, i guess we'll see how it goes.

[natalierules]

yeah i definitely read the whole thing. its obvious you have a great knack for poetry and short stories. this flows wonderfully and feels complete. but i think that once you get used to it you'll do just as well with a longer peice. goodluck! it should be fun

[uponthesky]

Hi, sorry I'm just a random person, but I read your story and really loved it. I feel like I'm sitting there in the heat as everything happens. It's really beautiful.

[messy_mexico]

hi! don't be sorry for being a random person.

it's really nice and exciting to know that you read this and enjoyed it as well. i'm really really glad that you felt the weight of the heat, too.

thanks for reading it and thanks for commenting. yay. perhaps i will post more writing, etc.
i keep a lot of my entries friends only so i'll add you!

[uponthesky]

Awesome, that sounds great. thanks. :)
I'll add you back if you want; though I post very often about very trivial thoughts, and it's mostly nonsense.