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FNL fic -- Jason/Tyra -- Revenge

Dec 09, 2006 01:54

Title: Revenge
Character(s): Jason Street/Tyra Collette
Word Count: 500
Rating: R/NC-17
Spoilers: Through 1.09 "Full Hearts".
Notes: Filling in what happened after the Tyra/Jason drunk pity party in Full Hearts.
Disclaimer: Characters aren't mine, I'm not making any money.

( It's revenge and it's drunken and wrong and everything Lyla wasn't. )

jason street, friday night lights, tyra colette, fic

Comments 7

insunshine December 11 2006, 12:40:38 UTC

Holy crap.

That's really intense, dude, but I kind of like it.

If anything were to happen between them, I could totally see it going like this.

metafic December 11 2006, 16:22:27 UTC

Hee, I hope "holy crap" is good.

And the way their little storyline ended last episode, I totally thought it was headed for drunk, bitter sex, but I guess not. Or at least they didn't show it.

insunshine December 11 2006, 20:55:35 UTC

Holy crap is good.

seattleheart December 28 2006, 04:09:07 UTC

dude, i heart you. would you like to hear why? of course you would. i love jason and i loved jason and lyla and jason and tim, so tim and lyla was like dude and sent me reeling and then i was like jason and tyra should get together just to spite tim and lyla because jason so loved tim even though he was in denial and thought he loved the evil bitch lyla but he didn't, he loved tim and was very betrayed by tim's choosing lyla and tyra was just there and had been with tim and jason could almost sense tim on her but not cause that'd be hard. okay. good job!

metafic January 4 2007, 02:29:40 UTC

Hee. Glad you liked it!

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metafic January 4 2007, 03:27:12 UTC

Wow, this is probably the best feedback I've gotten, maybe ever. Thank you so much!

I sort of like the idea of Jason/Tyra together, not much, but just enough to see the possibility, and you have pictured it quite plausibly. I don't know if this was your intention, but the ending totally kills any sort of romantic hope one could have when reading the fic That's pretty much exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad it came off that way to you! I don't see them working in any sort of long-term way, and so this was just really about bitterness and how they were both hurt by the whole Tim/Lyla thing and wanted to get back at them in some small way. I'm not a shipper at all, really, but it just seems natural for him to compare Tyra to Lyla, especially after being with Lyla for so long. So, yeah. This fic was pretty much, for me, about anger and bitterness and the two of them commiserating and getting their own back a little bit at the same time. I'm so happy you got what I was going for out of this little fic, and thanks for the ( ... )

thatdudejoe July 21 2007, 02:36:03 UTC

Hey, I know this is a weird place to put this but since this comment deals with FNL and this is an FNL fic...well you know...lol.

So anyway, me and a few other people from the FNL fandom all agree that the fandom is a little disorganized with all the fic communities out there. What we wanted to do was merge them all into one big "super-community" where anything and everything that has to do with FNL fanfic can be posted, instead of having three or four different places where some stories are only in one place while others are somewhere else.

Since you are one of the maintainers of be_perfect, I wanted to know if think it would be a good idea that we have one big community. But the thing is, for it to work successfully, be_perfect would have to go. And I'm not sure if you want to get rid of it or whatever. But I think with your help and approval of this new community, things would work out a lot better in the long run for the entire fandom.

Please let me know what you (and the other maintainer) think about this idea as soon as you