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Sweet Beginnings (4/4)

Jan 10, 2011 01:30

Title: Sweet Beginnings (4/4)
Author: chococoffeekiss
Rating & Warnings: Rated T/PG for language and a little bit of innuendo, Non-Magical American Modern AU
Prompt(s): hot chocolate
Format & Word Count: Chaptered, 1601/approx. 7500
Summary: Love's labors pay minimum wage; Tonks is a barista by day, ninja by night. Remus writes, or tries to. Sirius levels up. ( Read more... )

romance, chococoffeekiss, humour, winter hallows advent

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chococoffeekiss January 12 2011, 22:17:28 UTC

I've been thinking about doing a few drabbles in this 'verse (probably posting them in my journal) so keep an eye out and I'll see what I can work up.

Thank you so much for reading. :)

philotic_net January 12 2011, 16:30:10 UTC

Well its over and it was perfect. I want to curl up with a big mug of hot chocolate with whipped cream and read it all again. great job!

chococoffeekiss January 12 2011, 22:14:50 UTC

Thank you! ♥

Also, I love your icon. XD

sspring92 January 14 2011, 05:11:22 UTC

Very satisfying ending! I probably wouldn't have read this kind of AU if you hadn't written it. But it was really a lot of fun!

mrstater January 18 2011, 17:53:45 UTC

Only you could pull this off! I couldn't stop reading or laughing or shaking my head at how perfect it is! And now I want more!! (and please take Remus to Comic Con where he rubs elbows with Neil Gaiman and Smeyer.)

gilpin25 January 18 2011, 20:29:51 UTC

You know I read the summary at the start and thought "Ooh, I don't quite see how this is going to work..." It took me all of about two paragraphs to be totally hooked on how you were making it work brilliantly.

This is so clever and insightful; you must have put a lot of thought into it all, and yet it reads effortlessly and with as much charm and humour as the magical version. Like Tonks, I fell heavily for Remus here as well (even knowing about his short-lived grunge phase;)), and the backstory of Lily and James' deaths, and Peter setting Sirius up, worked a treat with the almost throwaway line about Peter being the designated driver. I may never be able to think of Minerva McGonagall seriously again; only of Minnie McG.

A wonderfully entertaining read and my one complaint is that there are only four parts. Though I see promises of drabbles in the comments above. :D