My Heart the Shape of a Begging Bowl

Jan 26, 2011 23:04

Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Rachel
Rating: PG-13
Words:~2k
Note: Written for avid_reader1029 at the glee rare pairs challenge. Thanks to calloohcallay for fixing my brain when I'm tearing my hair out and fixing things when I finish them.
This wasn't the way things were supposed to be. )

!glee:brittany/rachel, time:post-canon, length:oneshot, type:prompt, rating:pg-13, type:challenge

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kcollinson January 27 2011, 03:51:13 UTC
So...I liked this a lot more then I thought I would. The get together/ending was kind of abrupt for my taste (reading how they get together is my favourite part) but it worked for the story really. I really do love everything you write though. My heart clenched a little bit at the bit of Brittana though, but it's ok I still love you. :P Loved the imagery of Brittany's smile and all that. Loved the cute Bike friendship too. In the end, great story even though I don't ship them.

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meteoritecrater May 28 2011, 05:08:49 UTC
Yay, glad you took a chance on it even though you don't ship it <33

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justams January 27 2011, 08:14:23 UTC
I love this. How you describe things, Rachel's fading dreams, and your Brittany, and the cute ending. Just love it. :)

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meteoritecrater May 28 2011, 05:09:07 UTC
Thanks so much! :)

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beta_goddess January 27 2011, 17:03:04 UTC
What the first commenter said: you zipped right by the bit between talking and more-than-friends! But what you did write was really, really good, and completely believeable. I liked this story a lot.

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meteoritecrater May 28 2011, 05:13:21 UTC
Haha, yeah I know I did, but that wasn't the part of the story I was interested in. Maybe one day I'll sit down and write out how they got together :) Thanks, though, I'm glad it felt believable!

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dratij January 28 2011, 16:22:04 UTC
This was adorably awesome. I particularly liked Rachel remembering how sweet Brittany was after Toxic (mainly bc that was the moment I started shipping these two).

And I'm always a sucker for snuggling on the couch. Awesome job.

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meteoritecrater May 28 2011, 05:14:30 UTC
Yeah, that was the moment I started shipping them, too. They're so adorable together, I just can't deal with it. Thanks so much! <3

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icerose92 February 18 2011, 03:46:07 UTC
Mike/Brittany friendship!! Gah I loved it all!!

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meteoritecrater May 28 2011, 03:34:19 UTC
Mike/Brittany friendship is one of my favourites. Thanks so much! :D

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