Let me just say this first: I don't know how you do it, but you always, always get them so spot-on. When I'm reading your fics that's the one thing that stands out the most to me. It's fantastic, really, how you're able to do it. Everything that Sherlock does is so Sherlock. Everything that John does is so John. You've got their characterizations down to an art. ♥
The other thing: You write details so beautifully. You know I love details, Rosalia. I don't even know how to describe it, but it feels like I can sort of reach in and take all of the details from everything you write for myself.
And that’s how, in just one day, instead of two months, John leaves the cane, the shell, the fear, the loneliness of a green apple in a hotel room, the sand and the wince; he leaves all that behind, and he goes from limping to running, without even having walked. And that’s how, without Sherlock noticing, the catalyst is, for once, consumed in the process
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Everything that Sherlock does is so Sherlock.
Everything that John does is so John.
You've got their characterizations down to an art. ♥
The other thing: You write details so beautifully. You know I love details, Rosalia. I don't even know how to describe it, but it feels like I can sort of reach in and take all of the details from everything you write for myself.
And that’s how, in just one day, instead of two months, John leaves the cane, the shell, the fear, the loneliness of a green apple in a hotel room, the sand and the wince; he leaves all that behind, and he goes from limping to running, without even having walked. And that’s how, without Sherlock noticing, the catalyst is, for once, consumed in the process ( ... )
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Thank you so much, Alex, you are the sweetest.
ILY <3
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You're disgustingly talented darling and I can't wait to read the rest of it! ♥ ♥
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*muah*
(I also posted the entire fic in AO3, if you want to read it there:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/226079/chapters/342531 )
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