Breakneck (1/18)

Jun 08, 2011 09:31

Title: Breakneck
Author: methylethyl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft.
Disclaimer: QAF & Co. does not belong to me.
Author's Notes: A S1 AU that opens a few hours after Justin runs out of the car while ( Read more... )

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toto_too514 June 8 2011, 17:06:37 UTC
Wow! Off to a really intense start! Looking forward to more soon!

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methylethyl June 8 2011, 17:11:54 UTC
Yep, we did start off with a bit of a bang. I like throwing my readers into the thick of it and letting them scramble to get their bearings. *g*

More next Wednesday--see you then!

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ireland22 June 8 2011, 17:30:15 UTC
I think I am addicted.... so more soon - please

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methylethyl June 8 2011, 17:41:28 UTC
Ooo... Pretty icon. I love that shot of them.

I'll be adding a new chapter each Wednesday, which isn't exactly "soon", but it's not too far away, either. See you then!

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mander3_swish June 8 2011, 17:50:24 UTC
freaking fantastic story! Intriguing!
Luke sounds adorable...he and Gus are gonna be the bestest step-bros ever *wink, wink*?
Craig is an asshole...surprise surprise...
For a moment, I thought that somehow, he'd felt my pain and come running to my side ...love this initial twinge of hope Justin had.
Hot hot bathroom scene!
Can't wait for next wednesday! :)

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methylethyl June 8 2011, 18:04:02 UTC
Wow--what a fantastic review!

I can definitely promise some Luke/Gus interaction later on, though I don't know about step-bros. Lol. This is S1 Brian, after all. He's not too big on... relationships.

Unlike in canon, the Taylor household is already pretty strained before Justin comes out because of the situation with Luke, so yep, Craig's already an asshole by this point. Doesn't bode well for Justin coming out, does it?

I'm glad you liked the bathroom scene! There won't be porn in every chapter (to tell the truth, I don't even like writing it, but in QaF it's kind of necessary), but I promise more hot scenes to come.

Thanks, again, for the lovely review. See you next Wednesday!

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kmboatright June 8 2011, 18:31:07 UTC
The scene between Brian and Justin is great, Justin teasing Brian to get Brian to want him is so completely in character. Love Brian holding his wrists with one hand, love Brian realizing Justin was hurting and thinking that Justin was lying about enjoying it and feeling what other, weaker, people might consider regret (which Brian Kinney doesn't do).

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methylethyl June 8 2011, 18:51:07 UTC
Er... So... I take it that you had a flash of comprehension? I'd be happy to address your concerns, if you still have them.

In any event, I'm very pleased to hear that you liked the first chapter of this story! Justin's a bit shaky here, but he knows how to get what he can out of Brian even this early in their relationship. And I think we all like it when Justin being hurt shakes Brian out of his asshole persona. Even if it's just for a few moments.

I hope to see you next week, when I post the next chapter!

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itzy68 June 8 2011, 19:51:37 UTC
Very nice beginning! hope for a fast update :)

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methylethyl June 8 2011, 19:52:47 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. Updates will be every Wednesday--not super speedy, but not too drawn out, either. See you then!

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