Breakneck (3/18)

Jun 22, 2011 09:30

Title: Breakneck
Author: methylethyl 
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft.
Disclaimer: QAF & Co. does not belong to me.

you and me, but mostly me )

breakneck

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flequillitos June 22 2011, 15:15:42 UTC
today is wednesday!! yay!

I'm loving how you are telling Justin's story (with Luke,his parents...) but at the same time you introduce Brian and the gang and all makes sense to me,he has to take care of his son but at the same time he manages to be with Brian from time to time, but I think Brian will soon figure out something is not quite alright with Justin

plus the handjob?totally hot

see you ;)

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methylethyl June 22 2011, 16:13:28 UTC
There's a reason this chapter is titled "Balance"! Justin's got a lot of different things going on, and he's figuring out how to balance them all. And of course, while this is a cliche storyline, I at least didn't fall into the badfic cliche of one-dimensional plots. Other characters have things happening in their lives, too.

As for Brian finding out about Luke soon... we shall see. He does find out, I can tell you that much.

Glad you liked the handjob! It was my first one ever.

See you next Wednesday!

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camelhaircoat June 22 2011, 15:22:13 UTC
Wednesday is def my favorite day of the week. I love when I can close my eyes and actually picture the characters saying the words, and that's so true with your story.

Looking forward to next week!

*hug*
Amy

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methylethyl June 22 2011, 16:17:53 UTC
Lol. Yay Wednesday! I actually don't really like Wednesdays, so I guess this is sort of my way of... taking it back?

Wow--I hope the story continues to remain in character to the point where it sounds exactly like the characters in the show. That is the ultimate goal of a fanfic writer, after all!

See you next week!

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opsimath69 June 22 2011, 16:29:55 UTC
Very good. Was yearning for a good story for some time and now I'm glad I found one. Thank you and waiting for the next instalment.

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methylethyl June 22 2011, 17:28:51 UTC
Well, I'm happy to have provided it! Updates are every Wednesday. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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itzy68 June 22 2011, 16:31:34 UTC
I love that Brian came to Justin's school. Great chapter.

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methylethyl June 22 2011, 17:38:49 UTC
Lol--me too. Of course, I can see Debbie having to hound him into it, too. *g*

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conzieu June 22 2011, 17:04:11 UTC
Ahhh... I love Wednesdays...Excellent as per usual. Sorry gotta run. Keep it up!

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methylethyl June 22 2011, 17:42:15 UTC
Hey, a short comment is better than no comment at all. Thanks for reading!

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