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Breakneck (15/18)

Aug 10, 2011 09:34

Title: Breakneck
Author: methylethyl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft.
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breakneck

Comments 37

agneson9 August 10 2011, 14:02:27 UTC

*gasp*

methylethyl August 10 2011, 14:09:22 UTC

Hee.

yvonnereid August 10 2011, 14:17:13 UTC

Im in total 'awe' at this chapter hon,I loved it alot.
'Someone was getting jizz in his coffee' made me laugh for ages,but it was a tense chapter never the less.

Love ya xxx

methylethyl August 11 2011, 03:31:11 UTC

Thanks! You know that Justin would totally jizz in Brian's coffee, just to spite him. *g*

rainbow1907 August 10 2011, 14:19:08 UTC

Whooooot!!! Justin did it, bravo!!! I'm proud of him :) This was way better than on the show. Oh man, and Chris Hobbs is one nasty fucker, to attack Justin while he carries the baby carrier, that's lower than low and I hope he'll get what he deserves. Hmmm, and Brian's first thought was to pick up Justin to celebrate, that's nice! But now he has seen Justin's injuries and clever as he is he'll be able to put two and two together. I'm curious how this will play out. Next chapter on the weekend? *pretty please* And thanks so much for this fantastic chapter, loved it, as much as your whole story! Hugs, Rena :)

methylethyl August 11 2011, 03:44:52 UTC

It was certainly a whole heck of a lot more dramatic than it was on the show! Chris Hobbs was just in the right place at the right time to set all this in motion.

It would certainly seem, given Brian's angry reaction to Justin's injuries, that he's already put two and two of something together. I don't want o give anything away, though!

The next chapter will be posted on Saturday, no worries. We've only two more chapters and the epilogue--I can scarcely believe it!

anno53 August 10 2011, 14:21:32 UTC

Ruh roh. Brian's not as happy as he was. I really liked the story line that you came up with for Justin to get Kip. I kept thinking Justin wouldn't do anything!

methylethyl August 11 2011, 03:45:46 UTC

Nope, Brian doesn't sound happy at all.

Justin's just a big sucker when it comes to Brian. I think we all knew that he wouldn't be able to resist helping him in the end!

kmboatright August 10 2011, 15:12:26 UTC

Great chapter.
I like how Brian moves immediately to anger. No display of concern or worry. Straight to rage.

methylethyl August 11 2011, 03:46:56 UTC

Thanks!

Brian definitely moved straight to rage, although I think there's a little more to that than simple, "RAWR SOMEONE HURT JUSTIN". We'll see!