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Breakneck (17/18)

Aug 17, 2011 10:17

Title: Breakneck Author: methylethyl Rating: NC-17 Summary: Justin watches the last vestiges of support crumble beneath his feet, sending him into freefall. He can only close his eyes and pray he’ll land somewhere soft. Disclaimer: QAF & Co. does not belong to me. ( your shoes are untied, but that's what i love best )

breakneck

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kmboatright August 17 2011, 15:55:08 UTC

"But it wasn't our typical fuck. Which was not to say that it was bad. Just ( ... )

methylethyl August 17 2011, 20:06:52 UTC

Justin likes rough sex. He may be all into the romance and sweet gestures, but I really think that it's the rough, wild sex that does it for him. But this is probably the first time that Brian's ever slowed it down for him, and so I think he was mostly just a little weirded out.

Brian secretly cuddles. Sort of. In a way that makes it look like Justin's doing all the work, and he just happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Generally, I just love writing begrudgingly nice Brian.

Only the epilogue left, now. It makes me sad... *sigh* I'm going to miss this story, too.

minanda August 17 2011, 16:25:54 UTC

I really enjoyed this part. I like how you have subtly taken a very dark story and moved it slowly into a happier one. That is exactly how life is. Likewise, Brian has become more and more open about caring about Justin and Luke, which also matches season 1 canon. Good stuff!

methylethyl August 17 2011, 20:09:15 UTC

That's exactly what's happened--things were pretty bad for a while, when Justin was living at home and when he first struck out on his own, but then we reverse directions and start ascending. This chapter is really the end point of it all. Everyone is where they're supposed to be. All that remains is the epilogue!

yvonnereid August 17 2011, 16:39:28 UTC

'Awe' I loved this chapter alot! So much love,it was perfect hon.I loved it!
Vonnie xxx

methylethyl August 17 2011, 20:09:39 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Stay tuned for the epilogue!

bendabrenda August 17 2011, 16:47:50 UTC

It was well worth the wait! Great chapter! I look forward to reading more.

methylethyl August 17 2011, 20:10:06 UTC

I'm glad it was worth it! Just the epilogue left, now, and it'll be up on Saturday...

bendabrenda August 18 2011, 02:24:36 UTC

I'm sad to see it go.Any chance of a sequel? Can't wait for Saturday!

methylethyl August 18 2011, 15:31:25 UTC

Sorry, there's no chance of a sequel. Really. I haven't the time, energy, or desire to write one... This was fun, but once the epilogue is posted, that's going to be it.

sissi_parker August 17 2011, 16:51:22 UTC

OMG. That´s the very, very best. I had to wipe a tear of. That´s so sweet, romantic and sweet, for Brian at least. But still it´s all Brian. He is so in character. I think he wishes to have had someone like Justin as his dad. I think he got it. A child isn´t a disturbance of his lifestyle but a matter of joy. The story is so beautiful. I´m a little sad, that’s nearly the end.
And I absolutely love your Justin. He is so matured and still he is a teenager. I´m so proud of him.
I hope you could understand my confusing babbling.

methylethyl August 17 2011, 20:31:26 UTC

Thank you! This is definitely a sweet, romantic chapter--so fluffy, you should probably brush your teeth... Brian has finally come to recognize Justin as a father, and also, Justin has finally solidified his priorities. This chapter was a joy to write.

Stay tuned for the epilogue!