i still don’t know what is permanent [fic] [khr]

[mewling]

> i still don’t know what is permanent
> mewling

> { KHR, PG, gokutsuna, BL}
> { [future fic, AU-ish] Gokudera grows and he learns. Maybe it was only a matter of time. gokutsuna. yamatsuna}
> { I've been sitting on this for ages, waiting for myself to finish some other fics so I could post 'em all together. But that's not going to happen any time

Comments

[mewling]

*blinks sleepily* I would gush happily, but my eyes might fall out. Um. Thank-you so much ♥

[icedcandy]

Fuck. Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuck.

Oh my god. Ohmygodohmygodohmygod.

It's amazing. It's beautiful. alvaco,;f;jla;sd;vmfmj Excuse me while I babble incoherently. OTL;;

If I weren't supposed to be asleep by now (or finishing reading homework I didn't do), I would be able to give you a proper review. No. Scratch that. I don't I'd ever be able to give a proper review for something so lovely and heart-breaking and tear-jerking and just. Perfect. Perfect in all the right ways. Thank you for being such a wonderful, talented person to come up and write something as wonderful as this.

I think I'm crying.

[mewling]

(°▽°；) Uwah~ Thank-you so much!

[urei_sachi]

I love it ♥ *spazzes* Forgive my incoherence. I can never seem to find words to justify my praise for you.

[mewling]

(〃ﾟ∇ﾟ〃) Thank-you ♥

[katsumeragi]

Wow. That was just beautiful.

It's really well-written and very elegant.

The "Please let me be selfish just this once" was epically heartbreaking. I want to see more from you!!

[mewling]

Thank-you! Glad you liked it. Actually, this is one of my pre-hiatus bursts of fic.

[katsumeragi]

WWRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYY

D:

[scarlet_pencil]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Oh dear god, this is so awesome it's amazing. The way you portray Gokudera is just perfect, the right mix of insecurity and insane devotion and jealousy and it's perfect. <3 Your Tsuna is wonderful too. He's still cheerful and loving and everything we love about Tsuna, but he also has this melancholic note that fits the fic perfectly.

And my favorite part is in Paragraph xviii, where Gokudera finally, finally hears Tsuna say that he is needed, wanted, and Gokudera is practically unable to function with joy. :)

My only nitpick is in Paragraph xvii, where you say "It will be hotel bedroom." I think you need an a in there. Other than that, this is just beauty. ^.^

[mewling]

Ooops. 「(^^; ) *fixes* I hallucinate grammatical articles when I proofread.

And, um, wow. Thank-you so much. You describe it much better than I could. d(⌒o⌒)b