HP: See Right Through Me

[mewling]

seriesharry•potter
disclaimer(c)•j•k•rowling
ratedPG-13
warningsimplied•slash
words1091

titlesee•right•through•me
bymewling

summary: James will do what he has to be be noticed. Once you're his enemy, he doesn't let you go. Snape learns this the hard way. Slash, BL, implied Non-con. JPSS.

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Comments

[starvinbohemian]

Oh, I loved this. Very good. :)

[mewling]

Heh heh. Thank-you.

[shigurenovelist]

You did a really nice job with this. I really liked the way you used the "you" pronoun, instead of "I". I loved the way James was constantly pretending to not feel guilty. The little ways you characterized Snape, like the way he fights like a girl or an animal and the fact that he's a "prideful idiot who swears insults at someone when they’re holding his book bag over the lake" really brings him to life. Merry writing!

[mewling]

Thank-you so much! If you like that, you should really check out Just Like My Daddy by LizBee , from which my JPSS characterisations and even writing style borrows heavily.

[anonymous]

argh! bangs head. I hate you so much for writing such lovely fics! I can't believe you just converted me into a JPSS fan. Bad, bad you~