HP: Cause Formulas are for Nothing

[mewling]

ratedM
genregeneral
warningsslash,angst
words597

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summary: Everything wears out in the end. [snape/black, mild slash]
notes: …inconsistent…(basically, I'm bored)

Comments

[starawings]

severus reminds me of someone with OCD, or someone who can't live without structure.
I like that side of severus, But I don't think severus is a coward because he ran from remus, I would do the same. Who wouldn't if they didn't have a animagnus form!
But I like this story, its cool! keep up teh good work and I hope to see more soon!

[mewling]

(You're definitely a girl, huh). I'm generalising here a bit, but it's more common amongst men to see fleeing from a dangerous situation like this more as cowardice than common sense. (That's due to a lot of reasons, which I won't go into here). In any case, seeing Potter fight (and Snape doesn't know about the animagnus thing) would probably make him insecure.

Glad you liked it :D

[mewling]

♥ Me too. They're such a nice way to structure a story.

[nehalenia]

I really love the way you write. I'd call your style almost austere but it works beautifully. I'd love to see you write more of this pairing (and I'll take more of your James/Snape anytime, too). The emotions and relationships you describe are neither too hateful, nor too fluffy, but strange, haunting and as hard for the characters to give up as to understand. I will be toddling off to friend you so I don't miss any more of your stuff.

[mewling]

*grins* not that, with they way I pimp, you'd miss anything anyway.

Glad you liked it. Always lovely to hear from you.

[snegurochka_lee]

Awesome, I really enjoyed that. Fantastic style. :)

[mewling]

:-D Thank-you!

[nwhiker]

They just have to rip at any bit of exposed flesh, don't they? Theirs and each other's. Beautifully told.

Poor Snape.

[mewling]

^_^ Thank-you.