the one you're trying to save [fic] [hp]

[mewling]

> the one you’re trying to save
> mewling

> { harry potter, M15+, grindeldore, slash}
> { In reality, there were four people Albus wanted to save. }
> { My un-smutty springsmut fic. I should post my other contest fics to this account too. }

Comments

[penguingeek]

Wow, this is absolutely gorgeous. I love your style and the scene with Ariana, and the almost-repetition of the funerals. Very chilling and beautiful. :)

[sirdrakesheir]

The last line stabbed me in the heart. This was absolutely wonderful, just what I'd been craving.

[calanor]

wow!!

[fluckified]

I love this. Your characterization is completely brilliant, and it fits together beautifully.
Normally, I like neither second person or short sections, but this really flowed. (:

[anonymous]

I never review but I'm reviewing this because this is just gorgeous and deserving of more recognition and I'm hoping hoping hoping you will write more of this delicious angst.