So someone wants to kill Roy's past. BluePhoenix!Roy brought child!Roy to the future to keep him safe. Psycho!Ed does not seem to know much about child!Roy except that something fishy is going on and power is involved; he is interested in child!Roy for the power, I think. Hughes is so brave against Ed
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I only began reading FMA fanfics on FF.net a little over a year ago and only recently joined LJ. I am so glad that you updated this, enabling me to discover it.
I find what you are doing to be fascinating. Even aside from multiple universes, you have some very interesting concepts going on here. When Mirror 2 began bleeding into Mirror 4 (I think!), I began to take notes! I really want to keep things straight!
FWIW (and maybe butting in where I have no business) I have to agree with militsa about both that there is no necessity for you to have *meaningless* filler and that Roy should continue to be central (with Ed, Al, and Maes, if possible.) That 'said,' comic relief is often a good thing. xD
I am still chewing on the meaning of clockwise vs. counterclockwise (as to the direction of the stories in the mirrors).
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http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-the-difference-between-a-psychopath-and-a-sociopath.htm
http://www.straightdope.com/columns/read/2815/whats-the-difference-between-sociopaths-psychopaths-serial-killers-etc
So your Ed is a sociopath then?
Argh, so confusing!
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I find what you are doing to be fascinating. Even aside from multiple universes, you have some very interesting concepts going on here. When Mirror 2 began bleeding into Mirror 4 (I think!), I began to take notes! I really want to keep things straight!
FWIW (and maybe butting in where I have no business) I have to agree with militsa about both that there is no necessity for you to have *meaningless* filler and that Roy should continue to be central (with Ed, Al, and Maes, if possible.)
That 'said,' comic relief is often a good thing. xD
I am still chewing on the meaning of clockwise vs. counterclockwise (as to the direction of the stories in the mirrors).
Please continue with this excellent fic!
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