Ghost of Comfort, Angel's Breath (Keep This Life Inside My Chest), R, Dean/Sam

[mgbutterfly]

Title: Ghost of Comfort, Angel's Breath (Keep This Life Inside My Chest)
Author: mgbutterfly
Pairings: Dean/Sam
Rating: R
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: I make no profit. I do not own. I love to watch.
Beta: sardonicsmiley. She is the peanut butter to my chocolate. And despite her... lack of enthusiasm for Supernatural, she still betaed this for me and she is made

Comments

[lemanya]

*gasp*
just beautiful and utterly complex.

the repetition was a very good idea in getting the message across.

[mgbutterfly]

Wow. Thank you so much.

I'm glad the repetition worked. I hope it wasn't over done. Thank you so much!

[fromyourashes]

Oh. *sighs happily*

[mgbutterfly]

*smiles* You've made me very happy.

[ladybugkay]

I really like the way the repetition gives it that air of inevitability. This is the way the world ends because this is the way the world has to end.

And that it all hinges on a secret, well, I love that. I really love that idea.

Beautifully written, as always.

[mgbutterfly]

Thank you! I was a little nervous about the repetition. I'm really glad it worked.

Thank you so much. I feel like so many secrets surround those boys. Mmm.

You've put a huge smile on my face. Thank you, again.

[pyrokitten77]

Oh, this is wonderful! I love it! <3

[mgbutterfly]

Thank you so much!

[katharwen]

The imagery of this is wonderful. Actually made me a little teary, really.

[mgbutterfly]

Why, thank you! And I'm sorry I made you teary... *hugs* I blame the pretty, pretty boys. ^_^.