Fic: War Within - PG

[mgleteacher]

Title: War Within
Character/Pairings: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count:1015
Disclaimer: In its use of intellectual property and characters belonging to JK Rowling, Warner Bros, Bloomsbury Publishing, et cetera, this work of fiction is intended to be transformative commentary on the original. No profit is being made from this work

Comments

[drcjsnider]

Oh brilliant my dear! I love how Draco is the brave one and Hermione the coward and how young Skeeter tries to set things right.

[mgleteacher]

Thanks! XD

[nikkilicious377]

Very good! I love how its from the point of view of one of their future students (especially Rita Skeeter's son, lol). It gives a totally different view and it was really well written. I loved it.

[mgleteacher]

It was originally Draco doing all that research. >.>
Then it just changed halfway =]
I'm glad you liked it.

[gwinna487]

Rita Skeeter's son - that's creative. I don't think I've seen her child in a fic before, unless s/he's there just as annoying clone of Rita, so I like how Matthew is actually trying to help. How he takes after his mother and yet doesn't. I hope his plan works and gets Hermione to rethink her decision! Interesting that she's the one who's worried about what people would think, and so hopeless about the possibility of societal acceptance, but it feels like something that could happen. Maybe because Draco has had to go through so much more change and upheaval to get to where he is in life, he is more willing to take the risk? Anyway, very good job overall, and I apologize if this review makes no sense (and also for the rambliness and overanalyzing) because I am tired and not thinking straight at all.

[mgleteacher]

I like Matthew too. It's like...he COULD be like Rita but chooses not to. In the original version of this drabble they run away together at the end of the school year but it seemed eh...so I took it off. XD

Thanks for your lovely review.

[gwinna487]

He could be like Rita but chooses not to - that's exactly what I meant to say. XD It definitely comes across.

I think the open ending works really well. Better to leave their running off together to our imaginations. :)

You're very welcome.

[spottedcat83]

*snif*

*snif, snif*

*sob*

I want Hermione to go with Draco! *snif*

[mgleteacher]

She does! XD

[kazfeist]

This was superb. What a wonderful choice for protagonist, and I agree with Christy's analysis, too. Well done! :D

[mgleteacher]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it =]