Here I Am: Lochte/Phelps (R) 2/3

Sep 18, 2008 14:40

Title: Here I Am
Pairings: Lochte/Phelps
Rating: R for adult language/content
Disclaimer: Although I may wish it was real, it's not!
Notes: Thank you once again to my girls Kizzy7 and Wonderjessi for letting me bounce my ideas off of you and for muddling through my grammar :-*. Also, the lyrics that appear in this chapter are from the Leona Lewis ( Read more... )

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demi_de_melee September 18 2008, 22:59:56 UTC
I love the angst. And Leona!

I'm really looking forward to the next part, so I'm adding you.

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mgm86 September 18 2008, 23:41:54 UTC
Thank you my dear! The next chapter will be up very soon!

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navy_brat_1972 September 19 2008, 00:15:01 UTC
Can I PLEASE comfort Ryan? ;)

Seriously...hating yet loving the angst!

I can't wait for chap 3 and for the two to work it out.

*Bitch slaps Michael for breaking poor Ryan's heart. BASTARD!* ;)

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mgm86 September 19 2008, 00:49:51 UTC
Only if I get to comfort him first! I'm thinking chocolate ice cream and some sort of yummy cocktail! Chapter three is almost done and will be up shortly!

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navy_brat_1972 September 19 2008, 00:52:56 UTC
How about you comfort him with the chocolate ice cream and I comfort him with the skateboard? LoL

Can't wait for Chap 3!

Adding you to friends so I can read it! :)

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mgm86 September 19 2008, 00:54:22 UTC
Skateboard, huh? Sounds pretty kinky to me!

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miss_warina September 19 2008, 00:41:26 UTC
OMG!!!!
Please you just have to update this quickly!!!
I'm loving it!! XD

Mike you you you... bastard!! Dont break Ryan's heaaarrrt!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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mgm86 September 19 2008, 00:51:00 UTC
I promise chapter 3 will be up soon! And don't worry, Mike won't be such a jerk this time. There will be plenty of smutty goodness ;-)

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hiphopbox September 19 2008, 02:45:08 UTC
Poor Ryan. Michael was the worlds biggest asshole - I loved it. Just because Ryan knows what he wants and Michael's too afraid to admit it, doesn't mean he can just treat Ryan like crap. Gosh.

This is so good. <3

Is it alright to add you to read the next part?

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mgm86 September 19 2008, 04:01:37 UTC
I know! It was so heartbreaking to write, but I promise that Mike makes it up to Ryan!

Of course you may add me!

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mgm86 September 19 2008, 04:13:27 UTC
Just kidding! I added you first!

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agape_eternal September 19 2008, 09:51:14 UTC
Bad Michael!

Poor Ry *hugs him*

lol I'm off to read the next part. This is great.

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