Moving Day: Lochte/Phelps (NC-17) 3/3

[mgm86]

~Chapter 3~

11:12 PM

Ryan grabbed for the remote beside him blindly, turning off the TV with a grunt of triumph once he found the elusive black and silver object hidden beneath the blanket he and Michael had just been sharing. Where is Michael anyway? The reruns of Law and Order had just ended, and since it was the middle of July there was

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[navy_brat_1972]

This was a great ending to a great story! :) Don't know how I managed to miss the first two parts...but Love this story! :)

[mgm86]

Thank you my dear! I promise that parts one and two are in my journal. I was hoping to write some cute relationship fluff for our boys before the angst returns lol

[navy_brat_1972]

You can take care of the fun fluff...I can take care of the angst. Seems that's all I can write. ;)

I'm just giggling at the thought of Michael doing a strip tease and wondering how I can get him to one for me. ;)

[hiphopbox]

This was so good, I loved it. There is so much about this that was awesome, I just wanna quote the whole thing. But, seriously, IKEA?! That's the single most greatest thing I've ever read. That place is like heaven on earth.

This was so cute. I love fluff. Like, angst is good, too but I love it when they're all in love and there's a happy ending and you did that perfectly. ♥

I also think that Thanksgiving scene should be written out. It would be so funny to read.

[mgm86]

Haha! seriously, who does not love Ikea. It's so overwhelming but also so wonderful at the same time!

I felt that some fluff was definitely in store for them but my muses are hinting at an angtsy twist for who's at the door...

[agape_eternal]

LOL I love this so much.

XD lol I'd SWEAR you've read this convo between me and someone else on LJ. We were like, "It's be SO perfect it MP was dancing to BSB Risky Business Style" LMAO.

[mgm86]

Oh man! And here I was thinking I had a totally original idea! lol I actually had planned for Michael to dance to PCD "Buttons" but my friend and I were rocking out to some BSB the other day and I couldn't resist.

[agape_eternal]

LOL I wasn't ever gonna write it. We just happened to be talking BSB and MP at the same time lol.

I love it.

[mgm86]

tisk tisk, reading while in class? Shame on you! lol I'm glad you liked the first two parts and I can't wait to hear what you think of part three.

[aliform]

I love how couple-y you write these two. Everything between them feels so natural and intimate and it's great fun to read. Lol at Michael's strip tease attempt that didn't quite go completely to plan, and awww at Ryan being all comforting and reassuring. And I wouldn't mind reading about that Thanksgiving ;) You're absolutely awesome for writing all this & posting all 3 parts in one go.

[mgm86]

When I first got the idea for the striptease scene, it was going to be Ryan and a lot sexier, but then one of my betas convinced me to change it to Michael and awkwardness/sweetness ensued lol. I'm so glad you've enjoyed my venture into relationship fluff and I hope you're willing to board the "angst train" with the next part of the series.

PS: I just might write that Thanksgiving scene, perhaps it will be an early x-mas present lol

[aliform]

Oooh, angst train - what are you going to do to my poor heart? :P Ahaha, I'm fine for a little bit (or a lot) of angst, so long as there's that ohsodesired resolution at the end :P And I'm all for the early Xmas present :D

[mgm86]

All I can say is that there is a huge twist as to who's behind the door. One of our boys is going to go on an exhausting rollercoaster of emotions :-( but of course it will turn out well in the end.